Its a nice drawing, good anatomy and the pose is nice, it just looks a bit incomplete, maybe you could have did more shading to make the drawing look less 2d I dont know, good job anyway :)
Its a nice drawing, good anatomy and the pose is nice, it just looks a bit incomplete, maybe you could have did more shading to make the drawing look less 2d I dont know, good job anyway :)
I feel the background's emptiness may have to do with that. Someone recommended that I should use gradient fills if I use an empty background in the future. What do you think?
This looks great! Also reminds me of Max Payne 3 with the colors and just the style in general.
Thanks! Im a big fan of Max Payne 3 actually.
Man I don't get it, how the hell do you get such smooth lines on Flash (Animate), mine have wierd smoothing so the lines are never as nice and perfect as yours no matter what smoothing level I put on, ugghhh, good job anyway, nice animation too, keep it up.
The idea is not to turn smoothness up.
You want to have a thicker line and use your zoom so you can get some nice, solid strokes. A steady hand is useful.
I like this one alot, the neck could be shorter in my opinion but the colors and the her eyes make this really pleasing to look at, a nice improvement over your older stuff, keep it up!
Oh man, and here I thought that I used to draw tiny necks lol. Thanks for checking by! <3
Great nightmare fuel, good job!
Its nice, but lack of titties and ass, you couldve added a girl in there somewhere lying in the grass maybe haha
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This is not bad, pretty good actually, its just missing color in my opinion, and for the future if you are gonna post art then if its traditional id recommend scanning the drawings in a printer and then uploading because the quality of this image isnt very good and we cant see the entire detail.
ty for the tip i will do it next time
okay so you should work on the anatomy a bit more, the arms should have some sort of muscles, here its just the same size on the entire arm, also I see you added some pretty nice shading to her but not on her hair, you could have added it on the hair to make the drawing feel more complete, also adding a background helps so maybe add a background next time, I dont know
Thanks so much for the feedback. Will definitely take it into account for the next drawing I make.
I would say where you need to work but in this case you should work on everything, the drawing overall looks like it was drawn by a toddler
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